Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt

Hi Francis,

Sorry that I missed your comment. Your correction will be updated in the next revision.

Thanks.
Young

-----Original Message-----
From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko@piuha.net] 
Sent: Tuesday, May 26, 2015 6:21 AM
To: Francis Dupont
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt

Thank you very much for your review, Francis.

Jari

On 22 Mar 2015, at 22:49, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
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> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before 
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> 
> Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20150313
> IETF LC End Date: 20150318
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting to 
> send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available so I 
> adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed or 
> improved texts :-).
> 
> - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g.,
> 
> (it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-)
> 
> Thanks
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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