[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Sun, 22 March 2015 20:55 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150313 IETF LC End Date: 20150318 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting to send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available so I adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed or improved texts :-). - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g., (it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-) Thanks Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr