Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: "Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)" <naikumar@cisco.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
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Hi Nagendra, Thank You for addressing my issues! I am happy with the outcome, and have no further issues. Regards, Christer From: Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar) <naikumar@cisco.com> Sent: tiistai 31. elokuuta 2021 23.22 To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04 Hi Christer, Thank you for the detailed review and apologies for the very late response. Please find the response below: Q1: The Abstract and Introductions says: "This document proposes the code point to be used in the Segment ID Sub-TLV and Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV when the IGP is OSPFv3." I suggest to say "specifies" or "defines" instead of "proposes". <Authors> Sure. We will update the same. Q2: Would it be more clear to call Section 6 "Update to RFC 8287"? <Authors> Ok. Q3: Section 6 says: "This document specifies that the above code points will be used only for OSPFv2." I suggest to be more explicit, and say something like: "This document updates RFC 8287, by specifying that the "OSPF" code points will be used only for OSPFv2." <Authors> Ok. Q4: Section 7.2 adds a note to the IANA registry for the existing "OSPF" code point. Should this specification also be added as a reference for the existing "OSPF" code point (in addition to RFC 8287? <Authors>It already includes the code point as below: "IANA is also requested to add a note for the existing entry for code point 1 (OSPF) to read: - "To be used for OSPFv2 only". " Please let us know if you are referring to something else. Thanks, Nagendra Thanks, Nagendra From: Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> Date: Friday, June 11, 2021 at 3:58 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> <gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>> Cc: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.all@ietf.org> <draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.all@ietf.org>>, last-call@ietf.org<mailto:last-call@ietf.org> <last-call@ietf.org<mailto:last-call@ietf.org>>, mpls@ietf.org<mailto:mpls@ietf.org> <mpls@ietf.org<mailto:mpls@ietf.org>> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2021-06-11 IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-21 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is easy to read, and is almost ready for publication. However, I do have a few editorial comments that I would like the authors to address. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Q1: The Abstract and Introductions says: "This document proposes the code point to be used in the Segment ID Sub-TLV and Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV when the IGP is OSPFv3." I suggest to say "specifies" or "defines" instead of "proposes". Q2: Would it be more clear to call Section 6 "Update to RFC 8287"? Q3: Section 6 says: "This document specifies that the above code points will be used only for OSPFv2." I suggest to be more explicit, and say something like: "This document updates RFC 8287, by specifying that the "OSPF" code points will be used only for OSPFv2." Q4: Section 7.2 adds a note to the IANA registry for the existing "OSPF" code point. Should this specification also be added as a reference for the existing "OSPF" code point (in addition to RFC 8287?
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-m… Christer Holmberg via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert