[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Wed, 10 December 2008 11:30 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 2008-12-10 IESG Telechat date: 11 Dec 2008 Summary: The document is ready for publication as standards track RFC. I revised version -13 of this draft and now I have gone through the list of changes. With the exception of a comment that I raised to the IESG regarding the lack of public availability of a couple of reference, the rest of my comments have been properly addressed. Major issues: Still the draft have two normative references to two non-publicly available specifications, namely, [SMPTE-12M] and [smpte-eg40]. Nits/editorial comments: With the introduction of a new chapter 4, the references to old Sections 5.3 and 5.4 should be updated (this happens in Section 3). /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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