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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 10 December 2008 18:42 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
To: "'Miguel A. Garcia'" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com>, 'David Singer' <singer@apple.com>, 'Tom Taylor' <tom.taylor@rogers.com>, avt-chairs@tools.ietf.org, avt-ads@tools.ietf.org
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Miguel,
About the Major issues:
Still the draft have two normative references to two non-publicly 
available specifications, namely, [SMPTE-12M] and [smpte-eg40].

As far as I understand they are publicly available for a price. 
http://store.smpte.org/category-s/1.htm


I do not see this as a problem.
Roni Even

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From: Miguel A. Garcia [mailto:Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com] 
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Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt 

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2008-12-10
IESG Telechat date: 11 Dec 2008

Summary: The document is ready for publication as standards track RFC.

I revised version -13 of this draft and now I have gone through the list 
of changes. With the exception of a comment that I raised to the IESG 
regarding the lack of public availability of a couple of reference, the 
rest of my comments have been properly addressed.

Major issues:
Still the draft have two normative references to two non-publicly 
available specifications, namely, [SMPTE-12M] and [smpte-eg40].

Nits/editorial comments:
With the introduction of a new chapter 4, the references to old Sections 
5.3 and 5.4 should be updated (this happens in Section 3).


/Miguel

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Miguel A. Garcia
+34-91-339-3608
Ericsson Spain

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