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Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> Wed, 28 January 2015 23:15 UTC

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Date: Wed, 28 Jan 2015 18:15:06 -0500
From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
To: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
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On Wed, 28 Jan 2015, Joel M. Halpern wrote:

> Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC
>
> Major issues: N/A
>
> Minor issues: N/A
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>     Section 3.4 paragraph 2: "It is likely appropriate
>    for the acceptor to report this error condition to the acceptor via
>    the application's communication channel."  I presume that should be
>    reported to the initiator?

That is correct.

Thank you for the review!

-Ben

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