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Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 19 February 2015 11:44 UTC

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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
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Thanks for the review, Joel!!

Jari

On 29 Jan 2015, at 01:15, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote:

> On Wed, 28 Jan 2015, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> 
>> Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC
>> 
>> Major issues: N/A
>> 
>> Minor issues: N/A
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>    Section 3.4 paragraph 2: "It is likely appropriate
>>   for the acceptor to report this error condition to the acceptor via
>>   the application's communication channel."  I presume that should be
>>   reported to the initiator?
> 
> That is correct.
> 
> Thank you for the review!
> 
> -Ben
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