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Re: [Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 19 February 2015 11:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03
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Martin: thank you for your review.

Jari

On 02 Jan 2015, at 21:24, Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03
> Reviewer: Martin Thomson
> Review Date: 2015-01-02
> IETF LC End Date:
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
> 
> Summary: Ship it.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> I think that there are a few too many Unnecessarily Capitalized
> Phrases.  Consider downcasing for statements like "Power, Energy,
> Demand and Power Quality" or "It is assumed that Energy Management
> will ".
> 
> s/100.000/100,000/
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