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Re: [Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03

"Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich)" <mehmet.ersue@nsn.com> Fri, 02 January 2015 21:49 UTC

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From: "Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich)" <mehmet.ersue@nsn.com>
To: ext Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases.all@tools.ietf.org>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03
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Hi Martin,

thank you for your kind review. 

We will follow your comments for the update.

Cheers,
Mehmet

> -----Original Message-----
> From: ext Martin Thomson [mailto:martin.thomson@gmail.com]
> Sent: Friday, January 02, 2015 8:25 PM
> To: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases.all@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: GenART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03
> 
>  I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-coman-use-cases-03
> Reviewer: Martin Thomson
> Review Date: 2015-01-02
> IETF LC End Date:
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
> 
> Summary: Ship it.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> I think that there are a few too many Unnecessarily Capitalized
> Phrases.  Consider downcasing for statements like "Power, Energy,
> Demand and Power Quality" or "It is assumed that Energy Management
> will ".
> 
> s/100.000/100,000/

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