Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-v6ops-tunnel-security-concerns-04.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Mon, 03 January 2011 02:27 UTC
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From: Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-v6ops-tunnel-security-concerns.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-v6ops-tunnel-security-concerns.all@tools.ietf.org>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Brian, I see your point about the placement of Section 7. Would moving Section 7 much earlier in the document address your concern? If so, I can move it to Section 1.1 or (a new) Section 2. Do you think any more text is needed? Thanks Suresh > -----Original Message----- > From: gen-art-bounces@ietf.org > [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Brian E Carpenter > Sent: Monday, December 27, 2010 8:19 PM > To: > draft-ietf-v6ops-tunnel-security-concerns.all@tools.ietf.org; > General Area Review Team > Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of > draft-ietf-v6ops-tunnel-security-concerns-04.txt > > Please see attached review. > > > >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-v6ops-t… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-v6o… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-v6o… Brian E Carpenter