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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc3392bis-02.txt

"John G. Scudder" <jgs@juniper.net> Sat, 13 December 2008 01:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc3392bis-02.txt
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Very good.  I'll await the chairs'/ADs' comments regarding the  
registry.  Apart from that I think the below covers it.  Once we've  
settled the registry question I'll issue -03.

--John

Section 4., paragraph 1:
OLD:

     This is an Optional Parameter that is used by a BGP speaker to  
convey
     to its BGP peer the list of capabilities supported by the speaker.

NEW:

     This is an Optional Parameter that is used by a BGP speaker to  
convey
     to its BGP peer the list of capabilities supported by the speaker.
     The encoding of BGP Optional Parameters is specified in Section 4.2
     of [RFC4271].  The parameter type of the Capabilities Optional
     Parameter is 2.


Section 4., paragraph 6:
OLD:

           Capability Code is a one octet field that unambiguously
           identifies individual capabilities.

NEW:

           Capability Code is a one octet unsigned binary integer that
           unambiguously identifies individual capabilities.


Section 4., paragraph 8:
OLD:

           Capability Length is a one octet field that contains the  
length
           of the Capability Value field in octets.

NEW:

           Capability Length is a one octet unsigned binary integer that
           contains the length of the Capability Value field in octets.

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