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Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 24 January 2018 17:26 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 24 Jan 2018 12:25:55 -0500
Cc: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
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Meral, thanks for your review. Donald, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jan 4, 2018, at 7:37 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Meral,
> 
> On Thu, Dec 21, 2017 at 7:20 PM, Meral Shirazipour
> <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com <mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>> wrote:
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
>> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
>> comments.
>> 
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
>> Review Date: 2017-12-21
>> IETF LC End Date:  2018-01-08
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25
>> 
>> 
>> Summary:
>> This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
>> comments.
>> 
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> Minor issues:
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> -[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the
>> exact same text. Is that the intent?
> 
> The difference is the insertion of "[this document]" after the
> reference to [RFC7175]".
> 
>> -[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active tails"---->"tracking active tails"
> 
> Thanks for pointing that out.
> 
> Donald
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>> Best Regards,
>> 
>> Meral
>> 
>> ---
>> 
>> Meral Shirazipour
>> 
>> Ericsson Research
>> 
>> www.ericsson.com <http://www.ericsson.com/>
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