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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Fri, 05 January 2018 00:37 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 04 Jan 2018 19:37:07 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
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Hi Meral,

On Thu, Dec 21, 2017 at 7:20 PM, Meral Shirazipour
<meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2017-12-21
> IETF LC End Date:  2018-01-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25
>
>
> Summary:
> This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
> comments.
>
>
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> -[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the
> exact same text. Is that the intent?

The difference is the insertion of "[this document]" after the
reference to [RFC7175]".

> -[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active tails"---->"tracking active tails"

Thanks for pointing that out.

Donald
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
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