Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt

Thanks for the review, Suresh. Authors, can you take Suresh’s comments into account? Thanks.

Jari

On 29 Oct 2014, at 06:11, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> wrote:

> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html)
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt
> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
> Review Date: 2013/10/28
> IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30
> 
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Historic RFC, but I 
> have some comments you may wish to address.
> 
> * Section 7.1
> 
> The Length field of the IP address TLV in case the IP address is IPv6 is 
> not defined. It should be defined to be 18 (2 bytes for address family 
> and 16 bytes for the IPv6 address)
> 
> 
> * Address family reference
> 
> The IANA registry at 
> http://www.iana.org/assignments/address-family-numbers/address-family-numbers.xhtml 
> is a much better reference for address families than the currently 
> referred RFC3232 that does not contain any of the relevant information.
> 
> Thanks
> Suresh
> 
> 
> 
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt

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