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"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sat, 29 October 2011 15:46 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2011-10-29

IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-20

IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.  

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:  

 

I noticed that the example in section 3 is presented as XML but I did not
see any text about adding the new kind to the relax NG schema. 

 

"property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group" |
"org" | "location" }* }"

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