Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00

["Roni Even" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Peter,
I am not sure now where I saw the definition for the kind element that I pasted. So no problem with that. 
Note that you are referencing the WG drafts and not RFC6350, RFC6351
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Peter Saint-Andre [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Monday, October 31, 2011 4:45 AM
> To: Roni Even
> Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> CardDAV
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00
> 
> Hi Roni, thank you for the review. Comments inline.
> 
> On 10/29/11 9:44 AM, Roni Even wrote:
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> > you may receive.
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> > Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00
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> > Reviewer: Roni Even
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> > Review Date: 2011–10–29
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> > IETF LC End Date: 2011–10–20
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> > IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3
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> > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
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> > Major issues:
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> > Minor issues:
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> > Nits/editorial comments:
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> > I noticed that the example in section 3 is presented as XML but I did
> > not see any text about adding the new kind to the relax NG schema.
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> > “property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group"
> |
> > "org" | "location" }* }”
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> RFC 6351 defines "property-kind" as follows:
> 
> ###
> 
> property-kind = element kind {
>     element text { "individual" | "group" | "org" | "location" |
>                    x-name | iana-token }*
>   }
> 
> ###
> 
> New values are supported by means of the "iana-token" construction. See
> Section 6.1.4 of RFC 6350:
> 
>       An iana-token.  Additional values may be registered with IANA
> (see
>          Section 10.3.4).  A new value's specification document MUST
>          specify which properties make sense for that new kind of vCard
>          and which do not.
> 
> Peter
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