[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-01
Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 25 April 2023 06:35 UTC
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Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2023-04-24 IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-04 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. I find that the new text about zero-length Application Identifier Bit Masks provide better guidance then the previous one Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments:
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