Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07

[Russ Housley <[e-mail]>]

Thanks.

> On Sep 19, 2018, at 7:01 AM, Vincent Roca <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Hello Russ,
> 
> Thanks a lot for this review.
> 
>> Le 14 sept. 2018 à 23:52, Russ Housley <[e-mail]> a écrit :
>> 
>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>> Review result: Almost Ready
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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>> 
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>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>> Review Date: 2018-09-14
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24
>> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>> 
>> Summary: Almost Ready
>> 
>> 
>> Major Concerns:
>> 
>> None.
>> 
>> 
>> Minor Concerns:
>> 
>> Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174
>> in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: 
>> 
>>  The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
>>  "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
>>  "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP
>>  14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
>>  capitals, as shown here.
> 
> I was not aware of RFC 8174. Done.
> I will updated to companion I-D (draft-ietf-tsvwg-fecframe-ext) in a similar way.
> 
> 
>> Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^.
> 
> Done.
> 
> NEW:
>   a^^b     a to the power of b
> 
>> Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174.
> 
> Of course.
> 
>> 
>> The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add:
>> 
>> 	#include <stdint.h>
> 
> Done.
> 
> Regards,
> 
>  Vincent and Belkacem
>