Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07

[Vincent Roca <[e-mail]>]

Hello Russ,

Thanks a lot for this review.

> Le 14 sept. 2018 à 23:52, Russ Housley <[e-mail]> a écrit :
> 
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Almost Ready
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2018-09-14
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Almost Ready
> 
> 
> Major Concerns:
> 
> None.
> 
> 
> Minor Concerns:
> 
> Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174
> in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: 
> 
>   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
>   "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
>   "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP
>   14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
>   capitals, as shown here.

I was not aware of RFC 8174. Done.
I will updated to companion I-D (draft-ietf-tsvwg-fecframe-ext) in a similar way.


> Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^.

Done.

NEW:
   a^^b     a to the power of b

> Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174.

Of course.

> 
> The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add:
> 
> 	#include <stdint.h>

Done.

Regards,

  Vincent and Belkacem