Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-vpn-problem-solution-05.txt
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Mon, 31 March 2008 01:09 UTC
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From: "Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-vpn-problem-solution-05.txt
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Sami Vaarala wrote: > I see the wording there is a bit vague. The first bullet list > identifies the different overheads of the various modes. The > maximum one of those (97 octets) is then broken down into its > components in the second bullet list (20 + 57 + 20). > > My suggested fix would be to clarify the surrounding text a bit. > > Change: > > The overhead consists of the following: > > To: > > The maximum overhead of 97 octets in the 'cvc' access mode > consists of the following: This is fine. Thanks for your attention. - vijay _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-vpn-p… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-v… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mip4-v… Sami Vaarala