[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-dime-local-keytran-11

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Document: draft-ietf-dime-local-keytran-11
     Diameter Attribute-Value Pairs for Cryptographic Key Transport
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 30-June-2011
IETF LC End Date: 14-June-2011
IESG Telechat date: 14-July-2011

Summary: This document is presumably ready for publication as a proposed 
standard,

While I would have appreciated an answer to the quesiton below, that 
should not hold up publication.

Open Question:
     The document carefully and reasonably does not define the contents 
of the keying material AVP.  This reviewer presumes that those closer to 
the activity will know where the contents have been or will be defined. 
  Are they already defined, or will they be defined in future documents? 
  If they are already defined, would it make sense to state that, and 
identify the location?  (My confusion is that it would seem difficult 
for existing RFCs to define the format of a TLV that did not exist.  But 
that may be a failure of my understanding.)

Thank you,
Joel M. Halpern
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