Re: [Gen-art] [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17
kaigao@scu.edu.cn Wed, 27 October 2021 02:33 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17
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Dear Suresh, Please see below our latest revision of the Path Vector draft (-19). We have added IPv6 examples for each endpoint-based example. We hope this addresses your comments. Draft: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-19.html Diffs: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17&url2=draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-19 Thanks! Best, Kai > -----Original Messages----- > From: kaigao@scu.edu.cn > Sent Time: 2021-08-31 00:26:49 (Tuesday) > To: "Suresh Krishnan" <suresh.krishnan@gmail.com> > Cc: draft-ietf-alto-path-vector.all@ietf.org, last-call@ietf.org, gen-art@ietf.org, alto@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17 > > Hi Suresh, > > Thanks for the comment. We will add IPv6 examples in Section 8 in the next revision as soon as possible. > > Best, > Kai > > "Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org>wrote: > > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan > > Review result: Ready with Nits > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > > like any other last call comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https: trac.ietf.org="" trac="" gen="" wiki="" genartfaq="">. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-?? > > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan > > Review Date: 2021-08-30 > > IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-25 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: > > > > Overall, the document is well done and easy to read for someone with a > > background in past work done at alto. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > Please add some IPv6 examples in Section 8. > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > alto mailing list > > alto@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > alto@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto </https:></suresh.krishnan@gmail.com>
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