RE: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt

Jean-Pierre,

> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd 
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft. 

Please check with Lisa *before* you resubmit!

Thanks,
--David
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David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA  01748
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Evain, Jean-Pierre [mailto:evain@ebu.ch] 
> Sent: Friday, January 18, 2008 3:49 AM
> To: Black, David; ietf@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: lisa@osafoundation.org
> Subject: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
> 
> David,
> 
> I have now inserted the Full Copyright Statement as in RFC 4748.
> 
> I have adjusted the lines to the 72 character format. I'll 
> resubmit during
> the day with a couple of other corrections.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> jean-Pierre
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Black_David@emc.com [mailto:Black_David@emc.com] 
> Sent: vendredi, 18. janvier 2008 06:39
> To: Evain, Jean-Pierre; ietf@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: Black_David@emc.com; lisa@osafoundation.org
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
> 
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd 
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft. 
> 
> Document: draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
> Reviewer: David L. Black
> Review Date: January 18, 2008
> IESG Telechat date: 24 Jan 2008 
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits 
> that should be
> fixed  before publication.
> 
> Comments: 
> The minor open issue and most of the nits identified in the 
> Gen-ART review
> of the -01 version of this draft have been addressed in the 
> -02 version.
> 
> idnits 2.05.03 found two nits:
> 
> Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated 
> by RFC 4748:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>   ** The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.5 
> (updated by RFC
> 4748)
>      Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a 
> matching beginning.
>      Boilerplate error?
> 
>   Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>   ** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, 
> the longest
> one
>      being 2 characters in excess of 72.
> 
> Thanks,
> --David
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> David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
> EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA  01748
> +1 (508) 293-7953             FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786
> black_david@emc.com        Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754
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