RE: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt

["Evain, Jean-Pierre" <[e-mail]>]

David,

Yes, I had noted the procedure in your mail.  

Thanks for making sure

Regards,

Jean-Pierre

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Subject: RE: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt


Jean-Pierre,

> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft. 

Please check with Lisa *before* you resubmit!

Thanks,
--David
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Evain, Jean-Pierre [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Friday, January 18, 2008 3:49 AM
> To: Black, David; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> Cc: [e-mail]
> Subject: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
> 
> David,
> 
> I have now inserted the Full Copyright Statement as in RFC 4748.
> 
> I have adjusted the lines to the 72 character format. I'll
> resubmit during
> the day with a couple of other corrections.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> jean-Pierre
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: vendredi, 18. janvier 2008 06:39
> To: Evain, Jean-Pierre; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
> 
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft. 
> 
> Document: draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
> Reviewer: David L. Black
> Review Date: January 18, 2008
> IESG Telechat date: 24 Jan 2008
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
> that should be
> fixed  before publication.
> 
> Comments:
> The minor open issue and most of the nits identified in the 
> Gen-ART review
> of the -01 version of this draft have been addressed in the 
> -02 version.
> 
> idnits 2.05.03 found two nits:
> 
> Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated
> by RFC 4748:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>   ** The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.5
> (updated by RFC
> 4748)
>      Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a 
> matching beginning.
>      Boilerplate error?
> 
>   Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
>  
> --------------------------------------------------------------
> ----------
> ----
> 
>   ** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document,
> the longest
> one
>      being 2 characters in excess of 72.
> 
> Thanks,
> --David
> ----------------------------------------------------
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> EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA  01748
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> [e-mail]        Mobile: [phone]
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