Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-03

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 28 February 2012 16:23 UTC

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From: "Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: "'Christer Holmberg'" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "'General Area Review Team'" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thanks Christer,

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background
> on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD
> before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor
> editorial nits.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> - Section 1: Please expand 'MPLS-TP' and 'MPLS' when first used,
>    and add a reference to where MPLS-TP and MPLS are defined.
>
> - Section 1: Please expand ACH when first used. 
 
Yes to all of this except that "MPLS" is a well-known acronym in the RFC
Editor's list.

Cheers,
Adrian