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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt

"Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)" <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Mon, 31 July 2017 12:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt
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Thanks for the review!

> Am 11.07.2017 um 12:15 schrieb Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>:
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20170710
> IETF LC End Date: 20170718
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
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> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - 2 page 3 (twice) and 2.1 page 3: e.g. -> e.g.,
> 
> Regards
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> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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