[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Tue, 11 July 2017 10:31 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170710 IETF LC End Date: 20170718 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 2 page 3 (twice) and 2.1 page 3: e.g. -> e.g., Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-… Francis Dupont
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