[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03

["Roni Even" <[e-mail]>]

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document:  draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014-1-26

IETF LC End Date: 2014-2-4

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

1.       I am not sure what the use of the "description" option is. I can
see how to create one but as for usage the only text I can see is "Querying
the PCP server to get the description text of an existing mapping is out of
scope." I think that the document should provide information about the
purpose of this option.

 

Nits/editorial comments:

1.	The IANA section should provide enough information to fill the
registry
http://www.iana.org/assignments/pcp-parameters/pcp-parameters.xml#options