[Gen-art] review of https://pad.isc.org/p/Kea_Planning_2018-01-25 (update)
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Thu, 25 January 2018 17:52 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] review of https://pad.isc.org/p/Kea_Planning_2018-01-25 (update)
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180123 IETF LC End Date: 20180115 IESG Telechat date: 20180125 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: (update) I noted these on the 06 version but I refer to 09 (last) version which has been published since my review. - 2 page 3: update RFC 2119 by RFC 8174 (or leave the RFC Editor to do this) - Appendix E page 74 (twice): control-plane-protocl -> control-plane-protocol I trust Yangdoctor about yang correctness. Thanks Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of https://pad.isc.org/p/Kea_Pla… Francis Dupont
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