[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-04

[Christer Holmberg <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-betts-itu-oam-ach-code-point-04
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 7 May 2012
IETF LC End Date: 21 March 2012
IESG Telechat date: 10 May 2012
Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of editorial nits.
Major issues: -
Minor issues: -
Nits/editorial comments:

(The comments also applied to the -03 version, and I apologize for not bringing them up when I reviewed that version.)
- General: G-ACh is mentioned throughout the document, but only in section 4 is there a reference to RFC 5586. I suggest to add a reference on first occurrence at least to section 1. It would probably be good also in section 3.

- Section 1: What is the purpose of the last paragraph, talking about IETF Experts not agreeing? For someone who has not followed the work, it seems as little strange.
- Section 3: The text says "The G-ACh Type assigned by this document". I guess it would be better to say e.g. "based on this document".
Regards,
Christer