[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-05
Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 22 September 2019 12:10 UTC
Return-Path: <noreply@ietf.org>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietf.org
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5786B12013F; Sun, 22 Sep 2019 05:10:51 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
From: Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
To: gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: draft-ietf-core-hop-limit.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, core@ietf.org
X-Test-IDTracker: no
X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.102.0
Auto-Submitted: auto-generated
Precedence: bulk
Reply-To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Message-ID: <156915425127.1340.18230115848839912205@ietfa.amsl.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2019 05:10:51 -0700
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/fQHhy6-m6RiQYk-yX2wWNmw7sas>
Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-05
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2019 12:11:02 -0000
Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2019-09-22 IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-27 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 6.2 I am not sure why you have CUNR , I did not see these values in RFC7252 section 12.2 https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7252#section-12.2 or in the registry +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+ | Number | C | U | N | R | Name | Reference | +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+ | TBA2 | | | | | Hop-Limit | [RFCXXXX] | +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+ C=Critical, U=Unsafe, N=NoCacheKey, R=Repeatable
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-c… Roni Even via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Jaime Jiménez
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Roni Even (A)
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Roni Even (A)
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper