[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-05

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 22 September 2019 12:10 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2019-09-22
IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-27
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 6.2 I am not sure why you have CUNR , I did not see these values in
RFC7252 section 12.2 https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7252#section-12.2  or in
the registry

         +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+
         | Number | C | U | N | R | Name             | Reference |
         +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+
         |  TBA2  |   |   |   |   | Hop-Limit        | [RFCXXXX] |
         +--------+---+---+---+---+------------------+-----------+
             C=Critical, U=Unsafe, N=NoCacheKey, R=Repeatable