[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-geopriv-pdif-lo-profile-13.txt

["Miguel A. Garcia" <[e-mail]>]

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-pdif-lo-profile-13.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[e-mail]>
Review Date: 2008-11-24
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-30

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Comments:
- I have taken the effort of validating all the XML examples included in 
the draft. I used the Xerces validator available at 
http://validate.openlaboratory.net/. I find awkward to include 39 XML 
Schema files (thanks to the OpenGML explosion of schema files), but that 
doesn't seem to be a problem (other than for humans). Other than that, 
the examples all validate.

- The short name of the draft (which is printed as a heading in every 
page) is set to "GEOPRIV PIDF-LO Profile". I think it should be set to 
"GEOPRIV PIDF-LO Usage", since neither the title nor the text refer to 
the document as a profile.

- Section 1, first paragraph, add an informative reference to GMLv3 when 
it is mentioned in the text.

- Section 2, 5th paragraph, expand "LIS" and "LCP".

- Section 5, the first paragraph on page 15. What is a "WGS84 CRS"? Is 
this something where an informative reference could be added?


/Miguel


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Miguel A. Garcia
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