[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

[Sally Floyd <[e-mail]>]

Francis -

I just submitted a revised version of the draft, and put a copy at:
http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-07.txt

Let me know what you think.  After you are done, then we can
think about who to ask to read it from the ipv6 community...

- Sally
http://www.icir.org/floyd/

The changes are as follows:

      Changes from draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06:

      * Changes in reponse to the review from the
        General Area Review Team:
        - Added text to Overview about the role of TCP feedback.
        - Updated the flow label discussion from RFC2460 to RFC3697.
        - Instead of saying that the router SHOULD remove the QS Option
          when denying a request, but MAY zero fields instead,
          said that the router SHOULD either remove the QS option
          or zero the fields.
        - Fixed typos and clarified some text.

      * Still needs feedback from the ipv6 or v6ops community;
        - perhaps also have IPv6 people read the discussion of
          end-point address changes in Section 4.1.


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