[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-implications-on-ipv4-nets-03
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-implications-on-ipv4-nets-03
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-implications-on-ipv4-nets-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-4-6 IETF LC End Date: 2013-4-12 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. I found this draft very informational but I was wondering if it will be better to have in the introduction and the abstract a sentence that will mention the target audience for this draft.