[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-07.txt

Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Sun, 11 March 2012 21:31 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-07.txt

For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard. I do have a potential concern that you may like to address.

Minor
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* Section 6: MIB definition

The index field 'gBondTdimOperSvcPosition' of 'gBondTdimOperSvcEntry' is
defined to have a MAX-ACCESS of 'read-only'. I believe that it should
instead be defined with a MAX-ACCESS of 'not-accessible' since it is an
index field.

Thanks
Suresh