[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-08

Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 26 April 2021 22:48 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-08

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2021-04-26
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This draft describes the Geo-location object for YANG.  The document is written
very clear. I don't see any problem., except for one question:

The "pattern ’[ -@\[-\^_-~]*’" is used by leaf astronomical-body and container
geodetic-system. Why not creating a Constant for the pattern to be referenced?
in case you want to make changes to the pattern.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: None.

Best Regards,
Linda Dunbar

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-n… Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Christian Hopps
Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert