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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-08

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 17 May 2021 09:33 UTC

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Linda, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.

Lars


> On 2021-4-27, at 1:48, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-netmod-geo-location-??
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2021-04-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> This draft describes the Geo-location object for YANG.  The document is written
> very clear. I don't see any problem., except for one question:
> 
> The "pattern ’[ -@\[-\^_-~]*’" is used by leaf astronomical-body and container
> geodetic-system. Why not creating a Constant for the pattern to be referenced?
> in case you want to make changes to the pattern.
> 
> Major issues: None.
> 
> Minor issues: None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: None.
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> Best Regards,
> Linda Dunbar
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