[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-16ng-ip-over-ethernet-over-802-dot-16-10.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Thu, 27 August 2009 07:58 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-16ng-ip-over-ethernet-over-802-dot-16-10.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-16ng-ip-over-ethernet-over-802-dot-16-10.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> Review Date: 27 Aug 2009 IETF LC End Date: 1 Sep 2009 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC. Nits/editorial comments: The document is clear and well written. If possible, abbreviations should be expanded a first occurrence (e.g., QoS, MAC, CID, AR, DHCP, IGMP, etc.). /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
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