[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-aaa-diameter-sip-app-11.txt
Scott W Brim <sbrim@cisco.com> Tue, 14 February 2006 20:39 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-aaa-diameter-sip-app-11.txt
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(Sending only here because it's very brief.) I see nothing wrong, and suggest no objection. I would do some things differently but not enough to change it. There is one nit I would love to see changed: "acronyms" is spelled "achronyms". A spelling checker run will help. swb _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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