RE: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-Art Review: draft-ietf-msec-newtype-keyid-01.txt

["Vesa Lehtovirta (JO/LMF)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

Unfortunately Karl was not able to send the -04 version before
yesterday, apologies for being late. Version -04 is the latest one and
that should be the one to look at, if possible.

thanks and best regards
  Vesa 


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:[e-mail]] 
> Sent: 14. helmikuuta 2006 12:36
> To: Karl Norrman (KI/EAB)
> Cc: Elwyn Davies; [e-mail]; Russ Housely; Vesa 
> Lehtovirta (JO/LMF)
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] RE: Gen-Art Review: 
> draft-ietf-msec-newtype-keyid-01.txt
> 
> I'm a bit confused. The version on the IESG agenda this week 
> is -03, but you attached -04 on January 27. Which should we 
> be looking at?
> 
>     Brian
> 
> Karl Norrman (KI/EAB) wrote:
> > Hello!
> > 
> > Thank you very much for your review.
> > Please see the attached updated draft and inline.
> > 
> > [SNIP]
> > 
> > 
> >>Summary:
> >>[I understand from Laksminath Dondeti that this draft maybe 
> withdrawn, 
> >>but FWIW, here is my review.] This document has some minor 
> issues with 
> >>the IANA considerations and needs some editorial tidying up.
> >>
> >>The 'empty map' option worries me, but I am not 
> sufficiently much of 
> >>security expert to determine if this is justified.
> >>If this is cleared the draft could go forward (but it sounds like 
> >>there will be another revision pass to go through).
> >>
> >>Detailed Review:
> >>
> >>Issues:
> >>I am not sure that I fully understand what is going on the 
> >>justification of the need for an empty map(last para of s2).
> >>'... required parameters are signalled in-band.' => in what 
> protocol?
> >>I think a slightly less opaque explanation would help here.
> > 
> > 
> > An example is now given (the OMA DRM Content Format used 
> for download).
> > 
> > 
> >>Associated with this there should be an explicit statement in
> >>s4 that no equivalent of SRTP_ID would be needed in this case.
> > 
> > 
> > Such a statement is now added (Please note that there is a 
> new Section 
> > 3, so this text is now in Section 5).
> > 
> > 
> >>IANA considerations:
> >>This section should refer to the IANA process setup in 
> RFC3380 for the 
> >>payload type and the CS ID map type.
> >>It needs to define a new process for the Key ID Type registry.
> > 
> > 
> > A process is now set up in the IANA considerations section.
> > 
> > 
> >>Security Considerations:
> >>Are those that understand these things absolutely convinced that 
> >>creating keys without attaching them to an SA in the 
> process does not 
> >>create some sort of opportunity to create mayhem?
> > 
> > 
> > The security considerations section is now expanded.
> > 
> > 
> >>Editorial Nits
> >>
> >>You should run idnits: there are non ascii characters in 
> the document, 
> >>e.g. bullet point marks in s2.
> > 
> > 
> > This version passed idnits.
> > 
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Karl
> > 
> > 
> >>s1: 3rd para: s/possibility/ability/
> >>s1: 3rd para: (I take it that we are trying to make it 
> easier rather 
> >>than more difficult) s/should be/would be/
> >>s1: 4th para: s/involved/keys/keys involved/
> >>s2: 1st para: s/the MBMS/MBMS/
> >>s2: 2nd para: s/athree level/three level/
> >>s2 10th para: s/involved keys in the/keys being carried in a/
> >>s3: Tables and figures should have captions
> >>s3: s/bytes/octets/ (2 places)
> >>s3: last para: Actually I think (2^16 -1), but I hope I never have 
> >>that many keys ;-)
> >>s5: s/This memo is not foreseen to introduce security 
> implications./It 
> >>is not a anticipated that this memo will have any 
> additional security 
> >>implications beyond those already identified for the MIKEY 
> protocol./
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
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Dear Editor,

Please submit the new version of draft-ietf-msec-newtype-keyid-04.txt, 
work item in the msec WG.

Best Regards,
Karl Norrman
Ericsson

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