Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09.txt

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Tue, 22 September 2009 16:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09.txt
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Cyrus Daboo wrote:
> Hi Vijay,
> Thank you for your review.

Cyrus: No problem; sorry it was a couple days late.

> Would it suffice to keep the text as-is but change the title of that 
> section to "Eavesdropping and Data Integrity"?

Sure.

>> 2) Acknowledgments:
>>   s/S.Silverberg/S. Silverberg/
> 
> Fixed in my working copy.

OK.

>> And finally, this is more for curiosity than anything else
>>   -- are there any provisions for 3rd party event requests in  [...]
> I believe this is covered in Section 2.1.3: 
> <http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-calsify-2446bis-09#section-2.1.3>.

Ah, OK.  Looks like I forgot the earlier sections by the time
I got around to the end of the draft!

Thanks for your attention to the comments.

Ciao,

- vijay
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