[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3731bis-04.txt
Miguel Garcia <Miguel.An.Garcia@nokia.com> Tue, 17 October 2006 12:17 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3731bis-04.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-hollenbeck-epp-rfc3731bis-04.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2006-10-17 IETF LC Date: 2006-10-12 IESG Telechat date: (not known) Summary: This document is ready for publication as a draft standard. Comments: The document is well written and very clear. Perhaps the only comment is that Section 1.1., which his part of the introduction, contains some normative text (MAY, OPTIONAL, MUST, etc.). In my opinion, normative text shouldn't be present in Introductions, but elsewhere in the normative description of the text. /Miguel Garcia -- Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586 sip:miguel.garcia@neonsite.net Nokia Research Center Helsinki, Finland _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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