Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 05 March 2015 12:02 UTC

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Roni, Rajesh - thank you!

On 11 Feb 2015, at 16:00, Rajesh Pazhyannur (rpazhyan) <rpazhyan@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hello Roni
> 
> I have made the changes and will post an updated version (version 08) later today. 
> 
> Thanks
> 
> Rajesh
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> From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
> Date: Tuesday, February 10, 2015 at 12:11 PM
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> Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
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> Document:  draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date:2015–2-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2015–2-12
> IESG Telechat date:
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> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
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> Major issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> In section 1 “PBU” and “WLC” are mentioned but the full name appears later in the document. Should be specified when first used.
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