[Gen-art] RE: Gen-art review of draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt

Gonzalo,
Thanks, I will fix and submit a new revision that will include also comments from Pete Cordell in the IESG last call
Roni
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Friday, October 26, 2007 2:18 PM
> To: Orit Levin; Even, Roni; pierre@radvision.com
> Cc: Joerg Ott; Colin Perkins; Jean-Francois Mule; Cullen Jennings; gen-
> art@ietf.org
> Subject: Gen-art review of draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> 
> Draft: draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt
> Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
> Review Date: 26 October 2007
> 
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
> 
> 
> Comments:
> 
> Acronyms (e.g., XML, SIP, RTCP) should be expanded on their first use.
> 
> The document should clarify how errors are sent back to the original
> sender. This could be done in a new SIP INFO request or in the response
> to the original INFO request. The document should clarify which option
> should be used.
> 
> The Security Considerations Section should briefly analyze the
> consequences of attackers modifying the commands sent between two
> endpoints.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 


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