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Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Fri, 26 October 2007 12:19 UTC

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From: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt
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Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Draft: draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 26 October 2007


Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.


Comments:

Acronyms (e.g., XML, SIP, RTCP) should be expanded on their first use.

The document should clarify how errors are sent back to the original
sender. This could be done in a new SIP INFO request or in the response
to the original INFO request. The document should clarify which option
should be used.

The Security Considerations Section should briefly analyze the
consequences of attackers modifying the commands sent between two endpoints.


Thanks,

Gonzalo




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