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Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 22 February 2018 05:43 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 21 Feb 2018 21:43:48 -0800
Cc: Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "nvo3@ietf.org" <nvo3@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13
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Brian, thanks for your review. Yizhou, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Feb 6, 2018, at 6:46 PM, Liyizhou <liyizhou@huawei.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks Brian.
> 
> I will add " An IP address can be in either IPv4 or IPv6 format." to Section 1.2 Target Scenarios as below.
> 
> Section 1.2 Target Scenarios
> .... In the Split-NVE architecture, the external NVE may be able to reach multiple MAC and IP addresses via a TSI. *An IP address can be in either IPv4 or IPv6 format.* For example, .....
> 
> Rgds,
> Yizhou
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Brian Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, February 07, 2018 6:32 AM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: nvo3@ietf.org; draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13
> 
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-exp-codepoints-04
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-hpvr2nve-cp-req-13.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2018-02-07
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-20
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22
> 
> Summary: Ready (with minor issue)
> --------
> 
> Comment:
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> 
> This is a Last Call review despite the subject field.
> 
> Minor issue:
> ------------
> 
>   Req-10: The protocol MUST allow an End Device initiating a request to
>   add, remove or update address(es) associated with a TSI instance on
>   the external NVE. Addresses can be expressed in different formats,
>   for example, MAC, IP or pair of IP and MAC.
> 
> Here and elsewhere, it seems necessary to specify that an IP address can be in either IPv4 or IPv6 format. (This is implied in Table 1 and at the end of Appendix A, but that's quite well hidden.) I suggest clarifying this early, in Section 1.2 "Target Scenarios".
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