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From: Scott Mansfield <scott.mansfield@ericsson.com>
To: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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I am ok with Mahesh’s modification of my response related to the first sentence in the Security Considerations Section.

I would suggest that I leave the sentence and put in a not to the RFC editor to either add a pointer to the draft, or the RFC depending on whether or not RFC8407bis is finished or not.  I am hoping that to avoid the intf-ext-yang module to be blocked by the publication of RFC8407bis.

Regards,
-scott.

From: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
Sent: Sunday, October 12, 2025 1:29 PM
To: Scott Mansfield <scott.mansfield@ericsson.com>
Cc: Reese Enghardt <ietf@tenghardt.net>; gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; netmod@ietf.org
Subject: Re: draft-ietf-netmod-intf-ext-yang-17 ietf last call Genart review

Hi Scott,

Just one suggestion to address Reese’s comments. See inline with [mj]


On Oct 12, 2025, at 5:46 AM, Scott Mansfield <scott.mansfield@ericsson.com<mailto:scott.mansfield@ericsson.com>> wrote:

Hello, and thank you for the review!

Please see my responses and suggested actions marked by <scott></scott> in-line below.  Let me know if the resolutions are acceptable, and I will re-spin the draft.

Regards and Thanks,
-scott.

Snip...

Minor issues:

Section 9 (Security Considerations) has RFC AAAA, but I don't see where that reference is defined. Please double-check that this reference is clear.
<scott>
This is from the Security Considerations template found in draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.  I suggest that I simply take out the first sentence of that section since draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis isn't an RFC yet.  Leave the rest of the section because the new template is easy to read and use.
</scott>

[mj] I would just refer to the I-D itself or add a “Note to the RFC Editor”.

You can say - “This section is modeled after the template described in Section 3.7 of [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis]” and let the editor insert the right RFC number when it is assigned (possibly before this document gets to publication state).

Alternatively, you can add a “Note to the RFC Editor” and mention that AAAA should be the number that will be assigned to I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.

Thanks

Mahesh Jethanandani
mjethanandani@gmail.com<mailto:mjethanandani@gmail.com>

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