Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-grow-diverse-bgp-path-dist-07
Robert Raszuk <robert@raszuk.net> Mon, 16 July 2012 16:20 UTC
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Hello Wassim, Thank you very much for the review. Your editorial suggestion has been incorporated. I will post version -08 later today before the deadline lock. Many thx, R. > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-grow-diverse-bgp-path-dist-07 > Reviewer: Wassim Haddad > Review Date: 2012-07-15 > IETF LC End Date: 2012-07-19 > IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-19 > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as informational standard. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Editorial nit: suggest replacing "then" with "than" (except in section 4.2) > > > Regards, > > Wassim H. > > > > > > >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-grow-diver… Wassim Haddad
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-grow-d… Robert Raszuk