Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-opsec-ipv6-host-scanning-07.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 20 August 2015 06:11 UTC

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On 20 Aug 2015, at 00:56, Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com> wrote:

> Hi, Jari,
> 
> On 08/19/2015 11:14 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:
>> Francis: thank you very much for your review.
>> 
>> Fernando: I think it is a reasonable practice to refer to the obsoleted document
>> in the abstract (and in the Updates-from-RFCnnnn section).
> 
> Yes... that was my take as well... this was based on previous experience
> with other documents I had authored...
> 
> (Double-checking: No changes needed in this respect, right?)

I think that is right.

Jari