[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rid-06
Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Fri, 05 August 2016 15:09 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-avtext-rid-06 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2016-08-05 IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-12 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: I think it would be useful to move the last paragraph in Section 3.3 into a Privacy Considerations section. This would also eliminate the need for a pointer at the beginning of the Security Considerations. Nits: Please spell out SDES and SSRC the first time the term is used in the body of the document.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rid… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-avtext… Jari Arkko